First off - we saw so little of the original members in "The Beginning" that it's really hard to pinpoint character traits, but I think that you've done it perfectly. Danny always somehow struck me as obnoxious (perhaps even more so than Mick when it came to the band) and I love the idea that the Malt Shop and the P*lace are different places.
The scene where Mickey punches the brick is arguably one of the best things I've read in KI fanfiction. It shows Mickey exactly how I've always pictured him. He's smooth and calm on the outside, but on the inside he has real emotions. And I also think that bit shows that keeping this band together is a heck of a lot of work, and super ambitious for a bunch of kids.
The names you've given unnamed characters are brilliant (I'm absolute rubbish at inventing names...name generators are just no help sometimes).
Anyway, I'm super excited to see where this goes! I love fic that shows a what we saw in canon from a different perspective.
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First off - we saw so little of the original members in "The Beginning" that it's really hard to pinpoint character traits, but I think that you've done it perfectly. Danny always somehow struck me as obnoxious (perhaps even more so than Mick when it came to the band) and I love the idea that the Malt Shop and the P*lace are different places.
The scene where Mickey punches the brick is arguably one of the best things I've read in KI fanfiction. It shows Mickey exactly how I've always pictured him. He's smooth and calm on the outside, but on the inside he has real emotions. And I also think that bit shows that keeping this band together is a heck of a lot of work, and super ambitious for a bunch of kids.
The names you've given unnamed characters are brilliant (I'm absolute rubbish at inventing names...name generators are just no help sometimes).
Anyway, I'm super excited to see where this goes! I love fic that shows a what we saw in canon from a different perspective.